[[.|[up]]] ====== formal writing ====== ===== general rules ===== * don't ask questions directly * example: * bad: What can be done to achieve …? * good: It is necessary to consider how to achieve … * don't address the reader * don't use contractions (it's, don't, …) * more formal vocabulary * example: * enquire instead of ask * most distressed instead of very unhappy * state instead of say * impolite instead of rude * avoid alliterations * avoid unnecessary adverbs (like, already, even) * use formal linking words * use passive forms * example: * bad: You have to consider all the parameters. * good: All the parameters need to be considered. * be indirect * example: * bad: it is stupid * good: it is not very intelligent * be tentative (seem, appear, could) * parallelism: * example: * bad: A diplomat should be patient, intelligent, and he should have sensitivity to cultural differences. * good: A diplomat should be patient, intelligent and sensitive to cultural differences. ===== formal vocabulary ===== ^ informal ^ formal ^ | find out | determine | | | discover | | | investigate | | come across | encounter | | make up | invent | | go in(to) | enter | | put up with | tolerate | | | endure | | | accept | | look into | investigate | | | analyse | | give in | surrender | | job | position | | | employment | | | profession | | | post | | | career | | many | a (considerable) number / amount of | | | several | ===== formal negative expressions ===== ^ informal ^ formal ^ | not any | no | | didn't do | did no | | not much | little | | not many | few | | didn't do much | did little | ===== formal linking words ===== * for example * such as * including * e.g. * for example * run-on expressions * and so forth * etc * linking * firstly * secondly * finally * addition * and * not only … but also * furthermore * in addition * moreover * additionally * in addition to * as well as * unexpected result * yet * although * though * even though * however * nevertheless * despite * in spite of * regardless of * still (literary) * cause and effect * because * since * as * the reason why * now that * therefore * as a result * consequently * hence * thus * for this reason * thanks to * owing to * accordingly * because of * due to * as a result of * on account of * in view of * results in * leads to * impacts on * is responsible for * explains * is the cause of * is a factor in * influences * plays a part in * plays a role in * outcome * impact * effect * bring about * cause * give rise to * produce * precipitate * trigger * contributes to * under those circumstances * bring forth (too poetic, not used in natural sciences) * is caused by * arises from * is attributable to * is due to * derives from * stems from * results from * underlies * impedes * checks * inhibits * prevents * curbs * purpose * so as (not) to * so that * in order to * in order that * clarification * in other words * i.e. (no comma!) * that is * condition * if * even if * only if * unless * provided that * providing * as long as * in the event that * on condition that * so long as * when * whenever * whether or not * contrast * all the same, * while * whereas * in contrast to * however * unlike * even so * even though * nevertheless * although this may be true * on the contrary * at the same time * despite * in spite of * conversely * otherwise * regardless * exception * apart from * conclusion / summary * as can be seen * generally speaking * in the final analysis * all things considered * as shown above * in the long run * given these points * as has been noted * for the most part * in fact * in summary * in conclusion * in essence * altogether * to summarise * overall * to sum up * on the whole * all in all ===== misc ===== * especially vs. specially * especially = in particular * specially = "extra" * examples: * He is especially proud of … * These were specially done for me.